More changes to the story. Although the idea of having the kid misread the words and having the book-world change to compensate was interesting, it took far too much time to play out the acting choices convincingly. I simply don't have the time.
So it changed to the child deliberately getting carried off on his own little tangent story line- much to the knight's discontent. I see the potential of it, but I honestly don't like the new story as much. But...that's how things go.
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